We had a sentence stater and this was the rest of the story.
It was ment to be earth then they realised there was crazy people and crazy animals running around like headless chooks. "Wow" I said I think someone might have turned them crazy. Then...I saw a big dark hole I went closer and closer I saw how deep it was, my friends and I said "ooh", "ahh" and next thing you know Billy just jumped in and everyone said "Silly Billy"what do you think you're doing.
"I need to find what happened to my Dad" he said. This could lead to my Dad's mysterious death.
read the next book to see what actually happened.
By Tamsin
P.S There are bloody footsteps leading to...
This really good. And I like how you set well
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